The Power of Chocolate
Chocolate is loved by people around the world regardless gender, age and status. I am
one of them. The chocolate’s tastes are undeniable good and tasty, right? The
cream and the cocoa taste are marvellous. Are you a chocolate lover? Many
people claim that they are chocolate expert but what do you know about
chocolate?
Do
you know that chocolate are actually good for our health. People may ask you not to eat chocolate as it fattening you. Plus, chocolate may look full of cream
and sweet but there are also advantages of taking chocolate to our body. I have read from one novel stated that eating chocolate actually can reduce
stress and restore our good feeling whenever we feel depressed. I found that the smell of chocolate itself increases theta brain waves, which trigger
relaxation. From that on my attention started to focus more on chocolate and I
found many suprising facts about chocolate. Below are some of the foundings
combined several articles.
Dark chocolate has the potential to have the largest quantity of cocoa solids – at least to 70%. This means that 70% of the chocolate is from the cocoa bean and less from added sugars, oils and perhaps other fillers. Thus the antioxidants in the dark chocolate help the cardiovascular system by reducing blood pressure. Flavonoids found in cocoa products have antioxidant, anti-inflammatory, anti-clotting effects that can reduce the risk of diabetes by improving insulin sensitivity.
I just love chocolate the way there are..^^
References
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http://www.wickedlygourmet.com/about-chocolate/
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G. (February 18, 2013). Fascinating Facts About the World of
Chocolate.
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about-the-world-of-chocolate/

hello Kaseh.. hmm.. I want to make a correction here. on line 7, it should be.. 'not to' instead of 'to not'. on line 10, it should be.. 'we feel' instead of we feeling.. the others are okay and I think your contents are quite interesting. even me, I get a lot of new information through reading your essay. :)
ReplyDeletetq..mr ismeth,,i will get it right
DeleteMe love chocolate too! :P
ReplyDeleteit makes me feel lovely.. heheh.. ;)
very informative essay! fabulous chocolatey there!
ReplyDeleteHI Dear Kase, maybe you can just take a look on the uses of subject-verb-agreement ( line 1 ( chocolate followed by --- is--not 'are') and singular/plural. BTW, nice blog and nice information. I will love chocolate i think ")
ReplyDeleteso sorry for that..btw thanks
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DeleteVery true indeed... :) Nice piece of writing...
ReplyDeleteHay Kase'...I'm one of the chocolate lovers!
ReplyDeleteMaybe one day you want to treat me some? :D
My critic: You need to correct your choice of words ..I mean the type of word you use..hehe ^^